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CHAPTER 1 — The Sound That Shouldn’t Exist

CHAPTER 1 — The Sound That Shouldn’t Exist

The knock came again.

This time, unmistakable.

Three sharp taps.

Tap.

Tap.

Tap.

They echoed through the funeral hall like gunshots.

For a split second, no one breathed.

Then the screams came.

A woman dropped her handbag and backed into a marble pillar. An old man crossed himself repeatedly, lips trembling. Someone else whispered a prayer. Someone fainted outright.

The husband staggered backward.

His face—just moments ago composed, grieving, dignified—collapsed into something raw and naked.

Fear.

Pure, animal fear.

“No…” he muttered. “That’s impossible.”

The maid didn’t look at him.

She was still kneeling beside the coffin, her ear pressed against the splintered wood, her hands shaking so badly she had to clench them into fists.

Inside the coffin—

Another sound.

A muffled breath.

Weak. Ragged. But real.

“She’s alive,” the maid said again, louder now. “I swear to God, she’s alive!”

The room exploded.

“Open it!” someone shouted.

“Call an ambulance!”

“This is sick—this has to be some kind of joke!”

The husband raised his hands, his voice slicing through the chaos.

“Everyone calm down!”

No one listened.

Two men rushed forward, grabbing the edges of the broken lid. Together, they tore it away completely.

The coffin opened.

And hell broke loose.

Inside lay a woman dressed in white.

Her skin was pale—too pale—but not waxen. Her lips were tinged blue, but they trembled as she sucked in shallow, desperate breaths. Her chest rose. Fell. Rose again.

Her eyes fluttered open.

And when she saw the ceiling of the funeral hall—

She screamed.

A sound so raw, so broken, it silenced every other voice instantly.

Hands reached for her.

Too many hands.

She flinched violently, curling inward, arms wrapping around her head as if expecting a blow.

“Don’t—don’t touch me!” she cried. “Please—please don’t put me back!”

Someone shouted for paramedics. Someone else was already on the phone with emergency services.

The maid grabbed the woman’s hand.

“It’s okay,” she sobbed. “You’re safe now. I promise. You’re safe.”

The woman clung to her like a lifeline.

Her gaze darted around wildly—until it landed on him.

Her husband.

He stood frozen at the foot of the coffin, face ashen.

Their eyes met.

And in that instant, something changed.

Her fear… shifted.

Into recognition.

Into horror.

Into something far darker.

She screamed again—this time his name.

“You,” she whispered hoarsely. “You did this.”

The words fell like a curse.

A ripple moved through the mourners.

“What did she say?”

“Did she just accuse her husband?”

“That’s impossible…”

He took a step forward, forcing his voice to steady.

“Darling,” he said softly. “You’re confused. You’ve been very sick.”

She recoiled violently.

“Don’t call me that!” she shrieked. “Stay away from me!”

The paramedics burst in moments later, pushing through the crowd, their faces tightening as they assessed the scene.

“Clear space!” one of them barked. “Now!”

They lifted her carefully from the coffin and placed her onto a stretcher. Oxygen mask. IV. Rapid questions.

“What’s your name?”

She hesitated—then answered in a whisper.

“Evelyn.”

The husband exhaled sharply, as if relieved she remembered.

But then the paramedic asked the next question.

“Evelyn, do you know where you are?”

Her fingers clenched around the blanket.

“At my funeral,” she said.

The paramedic froze.

The whispers started again.

The husband stepped forward once more.

“I’m her husband,” he said quickly. “She suffered a severe accident. The doctors said—”

“No,” Evelyn interrupted.

Her voice was weak.

But steady.

“You didn’t think I’d wake up,” she said, staring straight at him. “That was the plan.”

Silence.

Thick. Suffocating.

The paramedic exchanged a look with his partner.

“Sir,” he said carefully, “we’ll need to ask you some questions.”

The husband forced a smile.

“Of course,” he said. “Anything to help my wife.”

But his hands were shaking.

Two Hours Earlier

Evelyn woke to darkness.

At first, she thought she was dead.

There was no light. No sound. No sense of direction. Her body felt heavy, unresponsive, wrapped in something stiff and unforgiving.

She tried to move.

Nothing happened.

Panic crept in slowly, like poison.

She tried again—this time forcing her fingers to twitch.

They brushed against smooth fabric.

Satin.

Her breath hitched.

She inhaled—and nearly choked.

The air was stale. Thin.

Her mind scrambled.

Where am I?

Memory came back in fragments.

The dinner.

The wine.

The argument.

Her husband’s face—calm, irritated.

“You’re imagining things,” he’d said. “You’re tired.”

Then dizziness.

The floor rushing up.

Darkness.

Evelyn’s heart began to race.

She tried to scream.

Only a croak came out.

She was lying flat.

Encased.

Buried.

The realization hit her so violently she nearly passed out again.

No.

No no no—

She clawed weakly at the space above her.

Wood.

She banged once.

Nothing happened.

She gathered what little strength she had left and knocked again.

Tap.

Tap.

Tap.

Then—

A crash.

Light exploded into the darkness.

Fresh air flooded her lungs as the lid shattered.

She screamed.

Present

At the hospital, the truth began to unravel.

Tests confirmed what Evelyn already knew.

She had been drugged.

A rare sedative—strong enough to slow the heart to near death, mimicking cardiac failure. Hard to detect unless you knew exactly what to look for.

The doctor’s face was grave as he spoke to the police.

“This wasn’t an accident.”

The husband sat across the room, hands clasped, eyes hollow.

“This is insane,” he said. “Why would I hurt my own wife?”

Evelyn lay in the bed, silent.

Watching.

Listening.

Remembering.

The police officer turned to her gently.

“Mrs. Carter,” he said. “Do you believe your husband tried to kill you?”

She closed her eyes.

Images flooded back.

The recent changes.

The locked phone.

The late nights.

The insurance documents she’d accidentally seen on his desk—documents listing her as deceased.

She opened her eyes.

And nodded.

“Yes,” she said. “I believe that was exactly his intention.”

The husband lunged to his feet.

“You’re lying!”

Two officers restrained him immediately.

Evelyn flinched—but this time, she didn’t look away.

“You buried me alive,” she said quietly. “And you stood there today pretending to mourn me.”

His mask finally shattered.

“You were supposed to stay asleep,” he hissed before he could stop himself.

The room went dead silent.

The officers looked at each other.

And then at him.

They put him in handcuffs.

As he was dragged away, he twisted around, eyes burning into Evelyn’s.

“This isn’t over,” he said.

May you like

She met his gaze.

“Oh,” she whispered. “It is just beginning.”

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